LJ Idol - Week 4: Ghosting

[dragonswimmer]

Black cat on hallows eve
Watching, waiting, trying to decieve
Will he cross your path we’ll have to wait and see
Running very fast coming round the tree
A ghostly appearance waiting for me
Black cat rubbing against my thigh
As I stare down at him I wonder why he dropped by
He purrs affectionately then trots off down the road
Past the halloween lights (the neighbors have a load)
I watched the distant corner as the cat slowed

Comments

[halfshellvenus]

Nice!

We have a black cat ourselves, and I thought about her for this prompt. Sometimes I call her "ghost kitty". She's like a photo-negative of a cat with color. :)

[adoptedwriter]

Awwwww....I LOVE kitties, especially black kitties! (see icon)

[tatdatcm]

Cats fit this prompt so well. Very well done.

[static_abyss]

I love that cats was what you thought off when you saw the prompt. Nicely done!

[the_eternal_overthinker]

Nice! I loved the sketch in the end.Also, good rhyming. A good job! Kudos!

[rayaso]

I enjoyed the rhymes and the poem in general. A black cat is a good response to the prompt.

[bleodswean]

Rhyming is the fun part of a poem and you obviously worked very hard on that! Good job! I like the idea of the cat wanting to deceive but then being pretty laid back. And bonus illustration!

[meridian_rose]

Cute :)

[murielle]

This is so cute!
I love that the cat is affectionate toward the person, and I love the artwork, too. Always an added bonus!

[favoritebean_writes]

I love this! Fantastic work. I'll share this with yamyam_kat when she's finished with her homework. She loves cats, and would greatly enjoy your poem and drawing.

[bellatrixe]

This is so cute :D

Cats make wonderful friends <3

[moretta]

Well done! Short but sweet, to the point. :)

[daisysparrow]

This had a nice pace to it :)

[nayanawrites]

I am not a cat lover and yet this piece sounded interesting to me...

But black cats ... Yikes !!!

[bewize]

Fun poem and great picture!